Quatrain Corner

[Loricybin]

dorment torment bendt

dormant doormat mint

door mouse dormouse house

dorset perception reflection :surprise:

[Loricybin]

edited

because

i didn't

like it.

[Pyrotex]

I started this quatrain with high expectations,

But I deleted the first line out of remorse.

I heavily edited both lines two and three,

And got writer's block on line four, of course.

[Turtle]

took out my red pencil to slash,

at passive constructions,

gutt some dangling participles,

and write off into the sunset.

:)

[Queso]

"I'm out flying with purple capes

in the twilight.

OOoooOoOOo . .

Tonight's the night." - Dr. Octagon

 

:hihi:

[Queso]

It will bring us good luck.

It turns on the heart.

In the morning when we play

It will bring us good luck.

[Turtle]

preternatural pumpkins,

jacked with hallowed lore,

evils grins a grinning,

at death and haunts and gore.

:D

:eek:

:hihi:

[Queso]

ghouls come and go

unlike the way people

stalk grid-like memories.

a program, limbless and twitching sparks,

[Turtle]

take a tetrahedral jibe,

Trimtab told us few,

unexperienced lower vibes,

'bout death is all that's new.

:hihi:

[Queso]

not the way the bones move

or anything,

headsettuplets gearing forth their

intersteller communicatable bus ride

[Queso]

the food pyramid,

a pyramid

with sugars fats and sweets

at the top like gold

[Pyrotex]

All foods, said the pieman, as sure as can be,

Are categorized on this nutrition tree.

Eleventy-six food groups are now firmly known.

Chocolate and alcohol have a branch of their own.

[Loricybin]

a map is not the territory,

surely this is true,

but the map whose scale is 1:1

certainly will do.

[LaurieAG]

Jesus lump of spinning old metal

recognise not your old fettle

reverse crosses thrice doused

then settle.

[Tarantism]

Such a pretty house

and such a pretty garden.

No alarms and no suprises.

Silence.

[Tarantism]

One day

i am gunna grow wings

due to chemical reactions

B)B):D

[Tarantism]

You were dimple dreams

in the summer i am

smooth honey drooling a smear

on the dress.