GAHD Posted March 11, 2005 Report Posted March 11, 2005 Quatrain corner sparked this cursemy mind is plagued with writing verseI had inspiration, a cure of cinquain!so without too much adieu,my poem "the bridge" I bring to you. I saw a dear old friend today;many years had past since our lives did stray.we talked of things, we both would know.But life was calling; We turned away While our backs were turned, our eyes afar,the test of time and the water's flowhad carved a chasm, who could have known?turning back surprised to findour paths too far to speak our minds We were left just standing there,so far away we could not share.Joys of life, our sea of hate,a chance to strip off this public face. We looked to our bridge, in reckless hopebut to teach us what we both should know,life would deal another blow.With a final nod we turned away;our bridge was burnt so long ago. Quote
Queso Posted March 11, 2005 Report Posted March 11, 2005 nice. so what are the rules to a punny-penta? Quote
GAHD Posted March 11, 2005 Author Report Posted March 11, 2005 punny penta is just a name. I'm punning on "penta"; five verses of five. Used some alliteration in the title to draw people's eyes.just make a poem as comes to your brainfive lines to this poem so in that they're the same. but a self reprised poemthat's done toobut who am i to tell you what to do?five lines to a verse is all that I asksome poetic licence will lighten the task Quote
Fishteacher73 Posted March 11, 2005 Report Posted March 11, 2005 Iambic pentameter and clouded metaphor,Scratching, erasing, and scribing a bit.Pentarchan, Shakspearian, and maybe more,A haiku in which seventeen fit.Reading only science would be a bore. Quote
Turtle Posted March 12, 2005 Report Posted March 12, 2005 I can't ignore such pointed verse,I see a number I must purse,and when the subject gets too terse,I shall my position curse,but then reflect, it could be worse. Quote
BEAKER Posted March 14, 2005 Report Posted March 14, 2005 It's night. Moon rises.No new supprises.Tired again. Pick up pen.keboards quicker.after liquer. Can't do all fivebarely alive.must sleep to keepfrom counting the sheepof Bo-peep. Quote
Queso Posted March 14, 2005 Report Posted March 14, 2005 i stopped, i thought,i could have sworn,that that was you,your veil was torn. Quote
BEAKER Posted March 15, 2005 Report Posted March 15, 2005 I wrote this about 20 years ago. I know it's not all "penta" - but here goes. Count the rings in any treeand I am sure that you will seea change has taken place insidethere is no way a tree can hidethe growth of time that does abide. Leaves are dropping to the earthbut always comes another birthto live and show the world it's worth. Some will grow so very slowits often hard to truly knowin which dirrection they will go. But there is never any doubtfor any tree, the slim or stoutof what it's life is all about. So innocent a tree will liveclean air to you and I will givea further breath of life to live. And living, it will stand on highforever reachng to the skywhen usefullness is gone; to die.How similar to you and I. Quote
Turtle Posted March 15, 2005 Report Posted March 15, 2005 That growth of tree,that rings do hide,by Fibonacci's numbers side,how many leaves around the stem,uniquely numbers each of them. Quote
Queso Posted March 15, 2005 Report Posted March 15, 2005 there once was gravity, said the fishbouncing off the brickswhat was gravity, asked the manit was around,it was around. Quote
Turtle Posted April 16, 2005 Report Posted April 16, 2005 I think I'm done,I have no more,words from the keys,no longer poor,and wandering off I go. Quote
Queso Posted April 18, 2005 Report Posted April 18, 2005 i sold my carinside a jarthen went to a barfell down really farmarklar marklar marklar marklar marklar Quote
Turtle Posted April 26, 2005 Report Posted April 26, 2005 How many lines have I laid down,while my many thoughts abound,always rushing round & round,bother not to look them up,they scatter past upon the ground. Quote
Queso Posted April 27, 2005 Report Posted April 27, 2005 a watch on a chain,swinging in the rain,the clocktower bells.clinging to the coat,the blanket. Quote
ledbassest Posted April 27, 2005 Report Posted April 27, 2005 “The Crusade”Crusade can’t arrive without serenity,And serenity without crusade.Violence is the key to lifeAs is serenity.Irony slowly follows. Quote
Turtle Posted April 28, 2005 Report Posted April 28, 2005 Dragons fly and Satyrs roam,in and out this five-line poem,no proof extant,its lack bemoan,perchance to meet a Dragon. Quote
Turtle Posted May 15, 2005 Report Posted May 15, 2005 Sequesterd thread of five line poems,crossed not the doorway of our homes,to cry of love lost lorns,or gods' contests announced by horns,but lay content by fire side 'till called upon once more. Quote
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