Tarantism Posted May 18, 2007 Report Posted May 18, 2007 i decided to take a shot a a Tolkien style poem...and this is what i got... i came across the misty mountainsto came into the dwarrowdelfand there i saw within the poolgolden phials glitteringwith the light of sun and moon-i went then towards imladrisfor my soul did tireand in the bright halls i took my restand listened to the songs of ancient onesand with heavy heart i moved on-further then to bree i wentand towards the sparkling seawhere at the sight of its silver i stoppedand drank in the fresh airat the silver gates that stood there-i came across the misty mountainsand then back towards my homefor now i walk on weary feetand my tired soul longs for home. Quote
Tarantism Posted May 18, 2007 Report Posted May 18, 2007 here is a tolkien poem for comparison. its my favorite by him. enjoy! Roads Go Ever On Roads go ever ever on,Over rock and under tree,By caves where never sun has shone,By streams that never find the sea;Over snow by winter sown,And through the merry flowers of June,Over grass and over stone,And under mountains in the moon. Roads go ever ever on,Under cloud and under star.Yet feet that wandering have goneTurn at last to home afar.Eyes that fire and sword have seen,And horror in the halls of stoneLook at last on meadows green,And trees and hills they long have known. The Road goes ever on and onDown from the door where it began.Now far ahead the Road has gone,And I must follow, if I can,Pursuing it with eager feet,Until it joins some larger way,Where many paths and errands meet. The Road goes ever on and onDown from the door where it began.Now far ahead the Road has gone,And I must follow, if I can,Pursuing it with weary feet,Until it joins some larger way,Where many paths and errands meet.And whither then? I cannot say. The Road goes ever on and onOut from the door where it began.Now far ahead the Road has gone.Let others follow, if they can!Let them a journety new begin.But I at last with weary feetWill turn towards the lighted inn,My evening-rest and sleep to meet. Still 'round the corner there may waitA new road or secret gate;And though I oft have passed them by,A day will come at last when IShall take the hidden paths that runWest of the Moon, East of the Sun. JRR Tolkien Quote
Moontanman Posted May 20, 2007 Report Posted May 20, 2007 Butterfly surfers Shy little butterflies, moving flecks of yellow greenWhy do you play among the breaking waves? What could this mean?Mostly you just taste the ground where the ocean meets the landBut when the wind and the waves are just right you do something grand The first time I saw you flying just ahead of the wavesI thought the wind had caught you and the ocean would be your graveBut the wind was calm and the waves smooth and sleek Dancing in the air just ahead of the waves, what is it that you seek? Gathering in a small group just above a rolling waveRiding down the cushion of air, could it be a thrill that you crave?Fluttering down the curl of a forming tube that shoots out butterflies in a clapWhy would you take that risk, just in time escaping from the trap? Could it be you seek the same thrill of the blond tan boys bobbing in the sea?Could an insect play the same games as me?Do they take a few minutes out of the hustle of their life, one summer long?In his place would you take some time to play before your summer was gone? Michael Hissom (all rights reserved) Quote
Queso Posted June 4, 2007 Report Posted June 4, 2007 THE WOUNDED DEER I've been drinking black mirror again the closer we part i needed to touch your lips with the nail in my heart the night that you caught me my coffin did walk i fell at your mercy i fell in your grave meccamputechture that stands in my way the younger i stay an elderly child the longer the mirror gives birth to the death i file if you consume me i will not let you go if you walk right through me my voice will taint your throat blessed be blessed bethe wrong i've done someone is watching us someone has found fluorescent ligaments on a black white tile why do you call them if your kingdom won't come the younger i stay forever i rot if you consume me i will not let you go if you walk right through me my voice will taint your throat blessed be blessed bethe wrong i've done because the flies my mouth spill bare the children at play:singer: Quote
Moontanman Posted October 28, 2007 Report Posted October 28, 2007 Seventeen To be seventeen again was once my fondest wish To know what I know now and be so young but not so foolishTo feel the fire in my veins and no fear in my chestTo ride my motorcycle like I was destined to the be the best To be able to watch the young girls through eyes not filtered by guiltMajorettes marching at a half time show and not feel I should not notice how they are builtTo walk the halls of my old high school and know how important the classes To know how going to college would have changed my life, my choices, forever To have the nerve to ask the prettiest girl to the prom, knowing what to say at every turn.To be serious when it was necessary and to have fun when I could and not try to act so sternTo savor every moment as if it were the last because as I know now each moment wasTo know that cool was just being who you were and not doing what everyone else does But now at fifty I look back and I would settle for reliving those days as ignorant as I was thenTo live wild and free and be not be burdened by what was to be in the future when Maybe just a touch of self confidence would be nice, less introverted, less afraidI could ride my motorcycle and not worry about what was yet to be, or the life I had made Yet, in my heart I can relive all the joys and sorrows of that time, even as they fade from my mindAll I have to do is think of the special things and it all becomes clear, the memories easy to findAt fifty on the outside in my heart I am still seventeen, still wanting to party with songs unsungHowever, my outside marks me as old, not to be trusted, I was guilty of the same when I was young Michael Quote
Loricybin Posted December 11, 2007 Report Posted December 11, 2007 voice of a mermaid. the words of a mermaid. this is the saint.she will deliver us from our own problemsby creating them. the face of a mermaid. she is she most sought,but having not forgot,we retain that we remainwhat we must, as we must. the waist-up mermaid. my god, by which i mean the infinite itself,woman woven of pure dream.oceans of wonder. the legs of an angel. Quote
Michaelangelica Posted December 11, 2007 Report Posted December 11, 2007 When my love swears that she is made of truthI do believe her, though I know she lies,That she might think me some untutor'd youth,Unlearned in the world's false subtleties.Thus vainly thinking that she thinks me young,Although she knows my days are past the best,Simply I credit her false speaking tongue:On both sides thus is simple truth suppress'd.But wherefore says she not she is unjust?And wherefore say not I that I am old?O, love's best habit is in seeming trust,And age in love loves not to have years told:Therefore I lie with her and she with me,And in our faults by lies we flatter'd be. Quote
Michaelangelica Posted February 14, 2008 Report Posted February 14, 2008 (Whatatop - Top pictures (great web site to waste a few days at) One of my favourite poems Stopping By Woods on a Snowy Evening Whose woods these are I think I know His house is in the village though; He will not see me stopping here To watch his woods fill up with snow. My little horse must think it queer To stop without a farmhouse near Between the woods and frozen lake The darkest evening of the year. He gives his harness bells a shake To ask if there is some mistake. The only other sound's the sweep Of easy wind and downy flake. The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, And miles to go before I sleep. And miles to go before I sleep. Quote
DougF Posted February 14, 2008 Report Posted February 14, 2008 Drifting by Kit McCallum I sometimes find I'm driftingThrough this life without effect;I often wonder if I'm trulyWorth what I've been blessed. I search through days that have been hard,To try to understand,The many trials that I have known,The life that I have had. You see me in my daily grind,So confident and strong;Yet when I am alone, I questionJust where I belong. I often try too hard I find,To analyze and guess,To scrutinize, investigateMy life I will confess. For somewhere deeper, there must beSome meaning to this life,Some way to make a difference,Give a reason for this strife. Is there some hidden meaning?Some agenda to be found?A greater purpose waitingIf I care to hang around? It teases and it taunts me,Always slightly out of sight;A hazy vision out of reach,Where darkness hides the light. I struggle to bring clarityTo what awaits me there,And yet this weak illusionAlways fades before my stare. It seems the harder that I try,To focus through the haze,Just serves to add more questions,Through my endless, tired gaze. Perhaps I'm trying just too hard,To understand it all,For can we ever truly knowJust what we have in store? Each incident, each moment passed,Just adds upon the next,But in the end, will I find truth ...Or will I be perplexed? Perhaps I make it harderThan it has to be sometimes,But will my searching bring to meMy meaning over time? Or will it leave me broken,And confused as I feel now,While questions bring no solitude,To this, my wrinkled brow. Quote
Moontanman Posted February 25, 2008 Report Posted February 25, 2008 Scattered across the sky, points of light to the naked eyeFiery orbs of red to blue, storms of violence unimagined to the mindMagnetic flames caress companions held in gravity’s bondCreating colors of heat-less flame in the sky Curtains of light shimmer and raceEvidence of magnetic defense from the companion’s heartAllowing a strange twist of entropy to multiply, exist and expandDefiance! Of the law that binds time and space Order and arrangement, chemical reactions grow more complexIn spite of the necessity to become simple and scatteredThings that move and should not exist,Mostly their form is no more than specks Completion spawns in entropy’s mirrorCooperation magnifies the mirror’s effect Forming masses of pulsating beings with no sense of timeNeoteny allows the young to steal from the old, that which is superior Complexity drives the defiance of lawSoon awareness of surrounding space Drives the increasing awareness of self and othersThe more aware leads the less to their maw While others escape to new spaces the aggressive can’t pursueOther less mobile forms raise antennae to absorbAll the energy of the glowing light from the skyCompetition is fierce between the motile and those that look to the blue Competition and cooperation step up the paceWhat will grow, multiply, dominate, or die Soon the liquid that dissolves the chemicals from othersNo longer surrounds those that have moved to the surface The surface is dry most of the timeRequires sex cells to become motileWhen the rain comes, unknown and unseen, sex covers the wet earth Sex cells swim up the trunks of trees allowing growth to dizzying heights The ones that move will not be left behind in this assault on the landHatched in the water but able to walk and slitherAnimals join the plants in conquest of the landEating not only the tall forms that feed on light but each other as well Eons pass neoteny makes the grade again and againAnimals revert to their larval forms again to hasten changeSoon warm beings rule the cool dry landFirst four legs then two strut out of the forest and across the land On of these tall neotenic beings walks into the morning sunHis mate and child walk with himLarge brains, opposable thumbs, reach for the groundPulling up a flower yellow as the sunThe man holds the yellow sex organ of the plant and sees beauty His mate smiles, they turn to continue on towards domination of the world Quote
Michaelangelica Posted February 25, 2008 Report Posted February 25, 2008 Moontanman Your poem?If so, you should write for a living. Quote
Moontanman Posted February 25, 2008 Report Posted February 25, 2008 Moontanman Your poem?If so, you should write for a living. Yes it was my poem, all the poetry I have posted here is mine. thanks for the complement. Quote
Loricybin Posted March 2, 2008 Report Posted March 2, 2008 forgetting about the transitive stance sensitive tenses,sub-transcendental pretending that sending these vibes of life and love to the concept up abovewill get you into your fairy taled cloud city,these silly pretenses feel so shitty.for real?..i'm kneeling down praying to the universe that nobody's listening,while i'm glistening, sweating pure catalysts,does that exist? yeah,trying to spit my thoughts and flowbut i forgot you all know how to spot a fake,so i'll flake out and leave the room,seal my tomb,cuz i know i'm not a writeri just ride the waves, alright? Turtle 1 Quote
Loricybin Posted March 31, 2008 Report Posted March 31, 2008 consider this a sexperiment.a candle lit(erary) rendezvous.this is what you least expected. this is a gentle kiss.this is what that kiss turns into.this is you losing control.this is your fingernails digging into my back.this is the sound you make when you don’t mean to make one.this becomes the two of us in the shower.this is us becoming dry once more by being mammals.this is a pair of handcuffs suddenly clicking around your wrists.this is you biting my lip because it’s all you can grab.this is a big, loud "ohhhhh ****."this is the ice cube.this is the blindfold.this is melted wax dripping onto your delicate skin.this is the smacked ***, the bit neck, the raw hickey.this is naughty.this is so much fun there are laws against it.this is the feeling of it all.this is the feeling of excitement. ...consider this inappropriate. Quote
Tarantism Posted April 4, 2008 Report Posted April 4, 2008 Norse code is awakened inside the figure eighthumbled through centuries of muttered beepstablature on skinny paper,and the language is trascribed in dotsdots that drip down the spine in colors of orange, yellow and indago glowyou could see it in an x-ray if you drained your latrine. Scales come from these words;"I guess you could call them words,the languages of the past smell and sound like the bellowing of birdsand the screaming of beasts to me". THERE ARE MORE NOTES THAN A-G, infact the extend infinitelyacross the sea and through the treestowards the infinity that is me,the thing that slowly and surely spouts from these seedsmagic beans, the beginning on which the tree leans wait, that isn't me, it already happened and I am happeningnow is not then, and the future is now and soon to be constantly arriving. Quote
modest Posted April 4, 2008 Report Posted April 4, 2008 Sorry to be a downer... This is like a time capsule I recently found (an old email) to my girlfriend who had recently dumped me. I was 18 or 19 - she left for NC State. It's funny how feelings so strong at the time are utterly insignificant now :) Is it enough for you to wonderif this is no more than a midnight blundermy heart feels the world asunderand now it waits for the pillage and plunder Is it enough for you to wanderLooking and searching for something a little fonderOr maybe take your time to ponderif this love is something to squander. You see, I heard you say you wantedthat thing you so desperately huntedI saw it in your act you so generously flauntedso quick, so soon, the same was shunted That cry for love I can no sooner forgetthan can I bring myself to admityour life is full of so much more important s##tthan the love of this placid misfit Tweedle dee,is this how it should be?tweedle dumb,have I won? Nick nack paddy wack, now I’m alonethis dumb *** has got nowhere to roam jack was nimble, jack was quickbut jack was dumb enough to fall for this trick zippidee doo daa, zippidee day,my oh my just another lay dear xxxxx, I’m glad I got to play Quote
Moontanman Posted April 5, 2008 Report Posted April 5, 2008 MERMAIDS COOL AND WET, IN THE LIGHT OF THE COLD WHITE MOONCLOTHED ONLY IN THE PHOSPHORESCENT WATERS GLOWWHERE AM I? ONLY THE NIGHT BIRDS AND THE FISHES KNOWNEAR BY A GULL, DISTURBED BY MY SWIM, SINGS HIS RAUCOUS TUNE THE WATER FLOWS OVER ME LIKE A LOVERS CARESSONWARD I DRIFT, WITH THE TIDES SALTY STREAMUNFETTERED, MY MIND BEGINS AN ODDLY FAMILIAR DREAMA WOMAN APPEARS, STANDING, LIKE ME SHE IS WITHOUT DRESS SHE DIVES INTO THE SHALLOW INLETS FLOWAND REAPPEARS, GLOWING WITH AN INNER LIGHTI GIVE CHASE, SWIMMING WITH ALL MY MIGHTWHEN I ARRIVE AT HER SIDE, AGAIN SHE DIVES BELOW BUT INSTEAD OF LEGS LONG AND SLEEKA FISHES TAIL FOLLOWS HER INTO THE BRINEMERMAID! THE THOUGHT RIPS INTO MY MINDI HESITATE, ASTOUNDED, BY THIS BEING THAT I SEEK AGAIN SHE APPEARS, THIS TIME NOT ALONETHREE MORE OF THESE APPARITIONS, APPEAR IN A WAVE CRESTAS GLOWING WATER CUPS THEIR BOBBING BREASTSTHEIR SIRENS SONG BEGINS, AND I BECOME STILL AS STONE THE SONG, MORE BEAUTIFUL THAN ANY MORTAL WOMAN'S VOICECAPTIVATES ME, HOLDS ME, UNABLE TO THINK OR MOVEMY LOVE, IT SAYS, TO HAVE THEM I MUST PROVEAS I LISTEN I REALIZE I AM BEING OFFERED A CHOICE TO JOIN THEM IN THEIR HOME, WET AND COOLTO SWIM, AND FROLIC, UNDER THE SEAFOREVER AND EVER JUST THEM AND MEJUST THEN A GULL CRIES OUT, "DEATH IS WHAT THEY OFFER, YOU FOOL!" WHEN I LOOK BACK TO WHERE THE WATER IS DARK AND DEEPONLY A FADING SPARKLE MARKS WHERE SIRENS SWAMI SHOUT OUT, COME BACK, ONLY THE GULL REPLY'S "FOOLISH MAN"THEN I REALIZE, THAT THEIR LOVE HAD A PRICE ATTACHED, FAR TOO STEEP! Michael Hissom Quote
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