Test door closed

[Dark Mind]

on his way to nothing

he wanted to say something

so that those who will not be

but are, will come to see

what matters most is not the ghost

but what it was before it wasn't

That was good...

I would've written it as follows though:

 

On his way to nothing,

He wanted to say something,

So that those who will not be

but are, will come to see

what matters most

is not the ghost

but what it was,

before it wasn't...:hihi:

[Turtle]

And so he has. :hihi: