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Posted

I wrote it country. It came out blues.

 

God Given Talent

 

http://jimcolyer.com/@tracks/239/hifi.mp3

 

He's a singer

When he opens his mouth

The words flow like a river

Some people say

He's got a God Given Talent

He's a dead ringer

For Billy Ray Cyrus

The way he looked in '93

He's got a God Given Talent for loving me

 

He's got rhythm

When he plays his guitar

The girls scream and holler for more

You can say it's a gift

He was born for stardom

I live with him

I know him better than anyone

I know how good he can be

He's got a God Given Talent for loving me

 

He could have a lot of women

A different girl every night

He makes his way back to me

When they turn out the lights

 

We've got a future

Money in the bank

And a home out in the country

We'll be together

Long after the music's been played

He's a natural

When he takes me in his arms

He makes it look so easy

He's got a God Given Talent for loving me

 

solo

 

He could have a lot of women

A different girl every night

He makes his way back to me

When they turn out the lights

 

We've got a future

Money in the bank

And a home out in the country

We'll be together

Long after the music's been played

He's a natural

When he takes me in his arms

He makes it look so easy

He's got a God Given Talent for loving me

He's got a God Given Talent for loving me

 

Jim Colyer http://www.jimcolyer.com/music/

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Posted

Well, ya don't *gotta* like it. Its different, and you can tap your toes to it. That's enough for me...

 

He's not responsible for what he's doing, ;)

Buffy

Posted

Everyone's a critic. Some like vanilla and others like chocolate.

 

Jim,

 

Thanks for sharing. Keep doing things that make you smile, and perhaps which add a smile to the face of those around you.

 

 

Cheers. :cup:

Posted
Thanks for sharing. Keep doing things that make you smile, and perhaps which add a smile to the face of those around you.
Ditto!

 

Strawberry or Pistachio,

Buffy

Posted

er, Yeah I guess that comes off as a little "harsh"

But aye!

I'm just ONE person,

one person who severely critisizes music

BECAUSE I have an understanding for it!

 

I have no interest in music like that

So I typed my opinions.

I always thought brotherly conduct was about honesty.

 

HRMMMM

Time to drink beer.

Posted

If I posted a song, (Here I am on post #4 for this thread. I really do post a lot, but it's not like this is a competition,

It used to be, when Tormod made it one over a year ago

Or a year ago

Or something,

But now it's just for kicks, accumulating)

 

I would want everyone here to give me their true opinions,

not just tell me "Oh yeah I like it!"

I would Want to know what you don't like about it,

and what you did like, too. If you did.

And whoa there! That's just ONE HUMANS opinion.

Ugh I don't even care what the rest think-

 

Long day's work and you just want to saw them all in half,

and record the screams

and put it in a song.

Posted

I saw a baby today bang two sticks on something wooden, or metal,

I forget-

And the baby began to chant gibberish in a pattern that DEARLY wished for stability! O He lit up

for the first time, Right there

in my art store, where I work.

I walked away and wrote about it on the internet.

 

The desire to make music, it's beautiful

and I want to say I respect anyone that has it...

 

but I definitely won't say that.

Posted

Calm down boys.

 

Its not like he's exactly Orb "Simon" Sycli...and I might look a little like Anastasia Brown but the similarity stops there.

 

So, to learn something here, stridency is sucky, and you can say something sucks but try to say it nicely, and knee jerking is totally jerky.

 

Everybody has a right to have my opinion,

Buffy

Posted
Thanks for sharing. Keep doing things that make you smile, and perhaps which add a smile to the face of those around you.

Jim's music may not be the favorite genre of some but he's having fun sharing it with us. I can certainly understand the desire to share as much as I like to share the news...

Posted
I was forced to listen to Bonnie Raitt as a kid during long drives to Grandma and Grandpa's...
You had to be *forced?* That's artificial *something*! :note2: Bonnie rocks and is bluesy to boot! :)

 

This song is decidedly not blues :hihi:. Country - yes
There are more similarities between the two than most would like to admit, but if its got a shuffle beat, its more "bluesy", so try rearranging the song like that...

 

I shot a man in Reno,

Buffy

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